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The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 5Chapter 5: Darkness FallsThe Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 5 by BrightDark89
A/N: Alright! Back to the original chapters! So anyway, my main inspiration were the stories "Flipside" and "The Right Place At The Wrong Time".
Celestia and Luna just stood there as Freezing Hate paced around the stage. "Why are you not bowing, aunts? I am your queen," Freezing Hate said with evil glee.
"You are no queen," Luna said, "you are a tyrant. Your coup 1000 years ago almost-"
"It is my right to be queen," Freezing Hate interrupted. "I deserved it! It is only because I was always in your shadows that I never got to the throne!" She then said the same words she said 1000 years ago. "There shall only be one queen in Equestria! And that queen shall be ME!" she roared, hooves slamming down on the stage, destroying it. "THAT is why you must bow before your queen!"
"And if you do become a queen, you would only rule Equestria with an iron hoof," Celestia said in response to Freezing Hate's speech. "You stopped being
The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 4Chapter 4: The Alicorn FestivalThe Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 4 by BrightDark89
The town hall was completely empty, and Sunset was both mad and nervous. She had been caught. "Princess, I can explain everythin-" she started. The sounds of Princess Luna's introduction were heard outside.
"Is it true that you've manipulated most of Ponyville, hurt many ponies' feelings, and might ruin the Alicorn Festival?" Celestia demanded, glaring at her. "Are you aware of the importance of the Alicorn Festival? That other ponies have feelings? And that it's not all about you?" she continued.
"I was trying to make you trust me again!" Sunset pleaded. But Celestia wasn't fazed.
"It pains me to say this, but... Sunset Shimmer, I am removing you from the position of my pupil," she declared. "If we cannot get past this, your studies end here. You are welcome to stay in Canterlot when the festival is over, but you are no longer welcome in the castle."
Sunset was livid now. Her studies, over! She'd never get to the crystal mirror. Never to b
The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 3Chapter 3: Many Encounters Will End In DisasterThe Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 3 by BrightDark89
A/N: This is the first revision-exclusive chapter!
"Sunset, I'm not sure if you should be usi-" began Flash.
"Oh, be quiet," Sunset interrupted. "I represent the Princesses for the Alicorn Festival's preparations. So what if a few strings need to be pulled?"
"But I'm not sure if-"
"How about we go see the music?" Sunset said, rolling her eyes.
"OK, Jitters, try and keep your chirping not too high," a yellow pegasus mare said to a chickadee. This was Fluttershy.
"Hello," said a voice behind her. Fluttershy made a small squeak as her birds flew away. The mare turned to see that it was Sunset Shimmer. "You're in charge of music for the Alicorn Festival, aren't you?" she asked.
"Um... yes," Fluttershy quietly replied.
"Good," Sunset said. "I want to keep this meeting short. You're doing good," she lied. "Keep up the good work." As the unicorn trotted off, followed by Flash, a light cobalt bluish gray
The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 2Chapter 2: PonyvilleThe Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 2 by BrightDark89
A/N: This chapter has quite a few things changed.
"Well, we're here," Flash Sentry said as he and Sunset Shimmer departed the train. "Welcome to Ponyville." Sunset levitated her luggage over.
"Lieutenant Sentry, be a dear and carry my luggage?" she asked. "That way I can focus on the preparations for the Alicorn Festival." A scowl from Flash was all Sunset had to see.
"Hay no," he said angrily. "I'm here to keep you from doing something reckless, not to be your luggage carrier. So, get to it."
Sunset glared back at the guard. "Excuse me? I am Princess Celestia's prized pupil, thank you very much, and you should-"
"How about we start with seeing the mayor?" Flash interrupted, clearly trying to change the subject. "We should at least get to know the place a bit."
"Oh fine..." Sunset deadpanned, shuddering about the disaster that might follow.
For the center of Ponyville, the town square was surprisingly empty. There was a lar
Hi, I'm BrightDark89, but you can call me Dark. I'm social but shy. And I like My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Zelda, Avatar: The Last Airbender, Legend of Korra, Disney, Pokemon, Persona, and writing!|
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