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The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 5Chapter 5: Darkness Falls
A/N: Alright! Back to the original chapters! So anyway, my main inspiration were the stories "Flipside" and "The Right Place At The Wrong Time".
Celestia and Luna just stood there as Freezing Hate paced around the stage. "Why are you not bowing, aunts? I am your queen," Freezing Hate said with evil glee.
"You are no queen," Luna said, "you are a tyrant. Your coup 1000 years ago almost-"
"It is my right to be queen," Freezing Hate interrupted. "I deserved it! It is only because I was always in your shadows that I never got to the throne!" She then said the same words she said 1000 years ago. "There shall only be one queen in Equestria! And that queen shall be ME!" she roared, hooves slamming down on the stage, destroying it. "THAT is why you must bow before your queen!"
"And if you do become a queen, you would only rule Equestria with an iron hoof," Celestia said in response to Freezing Hate's speech. "You stopped being
The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 4Chapter 4: The Alicorn Festival
The town hall was completely empty, and Sunset was both mad and nervous. She had been caught. "Princess, I can explain everythin-" she started. The sounds of Princess Luna's introduction were heard outside.
"Is it true that you've manipulated most of Ponyville, hurt many ponies' feelings, and might ruin the Alicorn Festival?" Celestia demanded, glaring at her. "Are you aware of the importance of the Alicorn Festival? That other ponies have feelings? And that it's not all about you?" she continued.
"I was trying to make you trust me again!" Sunset pleaded. But Celestia wasn't fazed.
"It pains me to say this, but... Sunset Shimmer, I am removing you from the position of my pupil," she declared. "If we cannot get past this, your studies end here. You are welcome to stay in Canterlot when the festival is over, but you are no longer welcome in the castle."
Sunset was livid now. Her studies, over! She'd never get to the crystal mirror. Never to b
The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 3Chapter 3: Many Encounters Will End In Disaster
A/N: This is the first revision-exclusive chapter!
"Sunset, I'm not sure if you should be usi-" began Flash.
"Oh, be quiet," Sunset interrupted. "I represent the Princesses for the Alicorn Festival's preparations. So what if a few strings need to be pulled?"
"But I'm not sure if-"
"How about we go see the music?" Sunset said, rolling her eyes.
"OK, Jitters, try and keep your chirping not too high," a yellow pegasus mare said to a chickadee. This was Fluttershy.
"Hello," said a voice behind her. Fluttershy made a small squeak as her birds flew away. The mare turned to see that it was Sunset Shimmer. "You're in charge of music for the Alicorn Festival, aren't you?" she asked.
"Um... yes," Fluttershy quietly replied.
"Good," Sunset said. "I want to keep this meeting short. You're doing good," she lied. "Keep up the good work." As the unicorn trotted off, followed by Flash, a light cobalt bluish gray
The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 2Chapter 2: Ponyville
A/N: This chapter has quite a few things changed.
"Well, we're here," Flash Sentry said as he and Sunset Shimmer departed the train. "Welcome to Ponyville." Sunset levitated her luggage over.
"Lieutenant Sentry, be a dear and carry my luggage?" she asked. "That way I can focus on the preparations for the Alicorn Festival." A scowl from Flash was all Sunset had to see.
"Hay no," he said angrily. "I'm here to keep you from doing something reckless, not to be your luggage carrier. So, get to it."
Sunset glared back at the guard. "Excuse me? I am Princess Celestia's prized pupil, thank you very much, and you should-"
"How about we start with seeing the mayor?" Flash interrupted, clearly trying to change the subject. "We should at least get to know the place a bit."
"Oh fine..." Sunset deadpanned, shuddering about the disaster that might follow.
For the center of Ponyville, the town square was surprisingly empty. There was a lar
The Freezing Night Revised Chapter 1Chapter 1: Sunrise, Sunset
A/N: Here's the first revised chapter, and boy, it's different than the original chapter 1!
Sunset Shimmer skimmed through books, looking for magic that would make her a princess. She eventually found a book that seemed interesting. "The Crystal Mirror... every thirty moons, a portal will open to... another world?" she read out of Canterlot Castle: A History.
"That's not really for you to know, is it?"
Sunset felt a chill down her spine. Slowly turning around, she saw... Princess Celestia. And she was mad.
"How dare you keep this kind of magic from me!" Sunset shouted, glaring at the Princess of the Sun. "You know that I'm ready for this, that I can be great!"
"You could be great," Celestia replied coldly. "I thought I saw compassion and sincerity in you, but it was nothing but ambition. You're being selfish, you need to step back and reflect..."
"I'm selfish?! That book right there says I could become a
The Freezing Night Revised: PrologueWelp, here we go. My third and final attempt at creating an AU. This'll be MASSIVELY different from my last one. Now revised so it makes more sense.
Once upon a time, in the magical land of Equestria, there lived two regal sisters and their niece who ruled together and created harmony for all the land. To do this, the elder sister used her unicorn powers to raise the sun at dawn. The younger brought out the moon to begin the night. The niece brought love to the land, showing compassion for all of Equestria. Thus, the two sisters and their niece maintained balance for their kingdom and all their subjects: all the different types of ponies.
But as time went on, the niece wanted attention. She was tired of being ignored, always in the shadow of the two sisters. One fateful day, she betrayed the elder sister by attacking her. The younger sister tried to reason with her while the elder recovered, but the bitterness in the young one's heart transformed her into a wicked mare of ice
And That's How Pinkie Pie Got Her Cutie Mark v2After watching Season 4, I thought I would revise my interpretation of the MLP creation myth.
In the beginning, before time itself, there was the Void. Eventually, the emptiness began to shift. And the Cosmic Scribe was born. The Scribe wrote down words into the void, and the Primordials came into being. Aether. Ananke. Chronos. Erebus. Eros. Gaia. Hemera. Hydros. The Nesoi. Nyx. The Ourea. Phanes. Phusis. Pontus. Thalassa. And Thesis. These were the 16 Primordials, who would write the laws of Creation. Gaia wrote down words, thus creating the planet. Hydros wrote water into the world. Aether wrote the atmosphere into existence, and Chronos wrote time. The Nesoi and Ourea created islands and mountains. But the most impressive was when Phusis and Thesis wrote life into the universe.
One race in particular fascinated the Primordials: Ponies. So the Primordials descended to the planet, taking the form of winged unicorns. They guided and taught the ponies different things about the
Pony POV Fan Song: Come little poniesPony POV Series
"Come Little Ponies"
Come little ponies
I'll take you away
Mama's warm embrace
Come little ponies
The time's come to play
Here in the
Follow sweet ponies
I'll show you the way
The fog will give you
What you want best
Weep not poor ponies
For life is this way
Mama will show you
Hush now dear ponies
It must be this way
I'll take you out of
Rest now my ponies
For soon we'll away
Into the fog
Your happy place
Come little ponies
I'll take you away
Into your Mama's
Come little ponies
The time's come to play
Here in the
Don't kill me for this (2)Chaptah 2
Takaya carryed da bag in2 hiz lare. He opend it and..... Lazuli fell owt!!1! "U will knot seel uweigh Nicks! Nsync shell awaykin and breed about da Fall!" Katara laffed statdistickully.
And den........ Mintao ran inn! "Takiuh, get ur hams of mi gurlfried" He simmoned Orfeus. Takiya summoked Hipnose, and releesed hiz pet lepurd!
Lizalfo summoned Satan, and he kooled da leotard wif Blakk Vypurr! Luzali den through Takata in2 a tiger pot!
Dey seduktively woked bak 2 Inuba, wear Lazili went into Joonez food cort. Da ownlee 1 dere wuz Ryoji Mochizuuki, who wuz sitting down board.
"Hai, Riojee-koon!" Lauli sed sexily. Ryiji rolled hiz eyes.
"Let me guess. You're here to try and seduce me, when everybody knows how you randomly kill people for no apparent reason, yet they still love you," said Ryoji.
Lazucki ignited dat cement. "Did u git mi tect massage?"
Ryoji sighed. "I deleted it as soon as I got it." Lauli wuz shacked wen she herd dat. "U dident!"
"I did," the boy replied
Loving You- (Levi x Reader) [AU]
*A/N: The song lyrics are included in the fic, so listening to the song would be perfect with this fic~
( X )
Just once in a day, I remember you, miss you
“I’m not spending hard earned money on your coffee.”
You pout, letting a small huff escape your lips as Levi takes hold of the shopping bags, a grunt emitting from his throat.
“But, come on this is the last day I can fully spend with you before-
2P!FACE x Child!Reader - Pranks
Today, you woke up three in the morning with brilliant ideas to prank your family. Maybe even take videos of their reactions?
First of, you started with Allen's prank since it's really easy. You just put his bottle of milk inside the freezer and wait until it became ice. Second of, you did Matthieu's prank. You replace his diet soda with sprite and soy sauce. Then you replace the Oreo cream into toothpaste for Francois and replacing Oliver's mayonnaise with vanilla yogurt.
After it's all set, you went back to sleep.
~~~Timeskip to when everyone woke up~~~
You ran into the kitchen first and put the frozen milk back into the refrigerator before Allen enters.
After that, Allen enters the kitchen and grab the frozen milk and a bowl of cereal. He entered the dinning room and sat down. That's where you started to record.
It took him a minute to realized that the milk was frozen. You giggled as he slam the milk bottle on to the table, "MATT!!"
2P!Canada x Reader - Day Off
"[Y/N], I've seen that you've been working hard for the last two months without taking a single day off," you boss said," And I must say, I'm very impressed!"
"Thank you sir! I love doing my job!" you smiled.
"Well, every ones a while, you need to take at least two days off."
"No thank you sir. I-"
"No no! You need it! To clear your mind and all, you know." your boss smiled.
You thought for a moment before nodding, "Okay sir! Thank you!"
"You can go home now."
You nodded again, grabbing your handbag and left your work.
While walking, you dialed your best friend's number and waited until he picks up.
"You Mattie! Wanna come and hang out with me?" you asked.
"Aren't you at work now?"
"Nope! My boss gave me two days holiday~ Meaning that we can hang out!"
"... Where to?"
Walking towards your favourite café, you were stopped by three men.
"Hey, babe~" one of them said.
"Back off bastards." you said wh
Drunk!2P!America x Reader - Don't Trust Me
You hold your camera close to you while watching TV. You had a feeling that Allen would do something as you already seen him drinking earlier. You waited for a while until footsteps, that sounds like someone was wearing high heels, can be heard.
You peeked from the couch and found Allen walking downstairs, wearing a black dress and black high heels. He also wore make-up which amused you. You then started recording when you noticed that he was too drunk to notice that you're in the living room.
Black dress with the tights underneath,
I got the breath of the last cigarette on my teeth,
And she's an actress,
But she ain't got no need.
She's got money from her parents in a trust fund back east." Allen sand as he flips his skirt over.
He then sat on the chair that was beside the stairs. Once he sat down, he crossed his leg and continued singing,
"Tongues always pressed to your cheeks,
While my tongue is on the inside of some other girl's teeth,"
"Ew." you muttered.
"Tell your boyfriend if
2P!Canada x Child!Reader - Do You Want Pie?
Matthieu looked away from his book to finding you holding a pie, "Did you make that?"
"Uh-huh!" you nodded, "Wanna try it?"
Matthieu took of his glasses, "Lemme try."
You walked towards him then threw the pie on his face. You giggled and ran away.
"Why you little!" Matthieu angrily said before chasing you around the house.
Physical check up | Doctor!Levi x Reader
Warning, may be pervy. Or not.
As you entered the clinic, you were greeted by a woman with ginger hair and eyes with glasses. She looked up and smiled at you.
"Hello and welcome to Survey Corps Clinic! How can I help you ma'am?" You took out a paper out your purse and handed it to the receptionist.
"I'm here for a check up," Your voice sounded a little croaky, like a frog trying to talk. She laughed under her breath, making you blush in embarrassment. She looked at it for a second before signing something, then gave the paper to another receptionist with short black hair sitting across her.
"Alright, I will call you when the doctors arrive, got it? For now, you may take a seat in the waiting room," Sighing, you sat down in one of the room's cold chairs.
After a what seemed a long while, you heard a soft, feminine voice call you out.
"[Full name], we will be seeing you now," You saw the girl with the same short black hair. You stood up, and walked over to her. She
Drunk!2P!FACE x Child!Reader - Drunken Night
Today, you were sitting with your family on the dinning table, watching them get drunk as you drink your strawberry milk. Allen, Matthieu and Francois seems to be calm and dumb while Oliver just gets angry. Just angry enough for him to slap the three. You tried recording but Oliver took it and threw your camera on to the couch. You were relieved that it landed safely and it's position was on your family, meaning that it was recording the whole time.
"Hey," Allen spoke, "Remember when I stick my leg out and Oliver tripped over and fell on the pool?"
"Well, of course! That's when you were just a baby." Oliver growled.
"No... I was just... Nine?"
"No, you were 96 that time." Matthieu corrected him.
"Then how old am I now?"
"2014." Francois replied.
"Hey hey! Remember that one time I tried to propose to Al?" Matthieu asked.
"I should have said yes!" Allen spat.
"Well, there is still time to propose." Francois suggested.
Mathhieu nodded as he holds Allen's hand
2P!England x Child!Reader - Photo Album
"Poppet~! Look what I got~!" Oliver said as he walked into the living room.
You looked away from the TV and found him walking towards you while carrying a a bunch of photo albums.
He sat beside you as he placed the albums on the coffee table in front of him, "This always brings the memories~"
"Are these photo albums?" you asked as you grab one of the album, that was red in colour and opened it on the first page.
"Yes it is~ I had been taking pictures of you, Allie and Mattie when you all are just a baby." Oliver responded.
You laughed, "Why is his pants wet?"
Oliver looked at the picture that you were talking about. It was a picture of Allen, who looked about your age, crying while his pants were wet on the crotch area.
"Oh, Allen peed on his pants when we're going back home from the amusement park." Oliver chuckled.
You turned the next page and laughed hard. There was a picture of Francois trying to calm both baby Allen and Matthieu who were crying while sitting on the tub.
Child!CanadaxMama!Reader: Mama Do You Love Me?
You groaned as you tried to pick up one of your fallen knitting needles. However the bulge at your midriff prevented you from doing so. Sighing you tried again.
“Al!” you called to your 6 year old son.
After a groan from the direction of the twin’s bedroom and then dirty blonde haired boy appeared. “What?”
You sighed, “Alfred, could you get me my needle.”
Another angsty huff and Alfred did as you asked.
“Whatever,” he grumbled and stomped back off to his room.
You sighed. He was, evidently, at that age when mom and dad weren’t ‘cool anymore and becoming just a pain to be around. Going back to your baby booties you let your mind turn off as you went back to your work.
You were so immersed with your work that you didn’t even hear your son the first time he called to you.
“Mama?” Matthew asked.
Your head finally snapped up and you smiled, “Hey, Mattie. What is it?
Mystery of Star Swirl (Chapter 1)Chapter 1: Dinky's Report
Ponyville Schoolhouse was abuzz with foals presenting their reports on famous ponies.
"Thank you for your report on Minty, Twist," said Cheerilee.
"You're welcome, Mith Cheerilee," replied Twist. She trotted back to her seat.
"Who wants to go next?" Cheerilee asked. She noticed Dinky Hooves raising her hoof. "Dinky, do you want to go?"
"Yes, ma'am!" Dinky exclaimed, trotted up to the front. "My report is about Star Swirl the Bearded."
"You can't do a report better than mine on my great-grandfather!" called Diamond Tiara. A "SHH!" from Silver Spoon kept her quiet.
"OK… Star Swirl the Bearded was the most important conjurer of the Pre-Classical Era. He founded Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns and created over 300 spells. But Star Swirl was best known for his travels around the world to learn about magic." She noticed her classmates, including Silver Spoon, looked extremely excited.
"From his travels," Dinky continued, "Star Swirl learned many
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