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The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 5Chapter 5: Darkness Falls
A/N: Alright! Back to the original chapters! So anyway, my main inspiration were the stories "Flipside" and "The Right Place At The Wrong Time".
Celestia and Luna just stood there as Freezing Hate paced around the stage. "Why are you not bowing, aunts? I am your queen," Freezing Hate said with evil glee.
"You are no queen," Luna said, "you are a tyrant. Your coup 1000 years ago almost-"
"It is my right to be queen," Freezing Hate interrupted. "I deserved it! It is only because I was always in your shadows that I never got to the throne!" She then said the same words she said 1000 years ago. "There shall only be one queen in Equestria! And that queen shall be ME!" she roared, hooves slamming down on the stage, destroying it. "THAT is why you must bow before your queen!"
"And if you do become a queen, you would only rule Equestria with an iron hoof," Celestia said in response to Freezing Hate's speech. "You stopped being
The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 4Chapter 4: The Alicorn Festival
The town hall was completely empty, and Sunset was both mad and nervous. She had been caught. "Princess, I can explain everythin-" she started. The sounds of Princess Luna's introduction were heard outside.
"Is it true that you've manipulated most of Ponyville, hurt many ponies' feelings, and might ruin the Alicorn Festival?" Celestia demanded, glaring at her. "Are you aware of the importance of the Alicorn Festival? That other ponies have feelings? And that it's not all about you?" she continued.
"I was trying to make you trust me again!" Sunset pleaded. But Celestia wasn't fazed.
"It pains me to say this, but... Sunset Shimmer, I am removing you from the position of my pupil," she declared. "If we cannot get past this, your studies end here. You are welcome to stay in Canterlot when the festival is over, but you are no longer welcome in the castle."
Sunset was livid now. Her studies, over! She'd never get to the crystal mirror. Never to b
The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 3Chapter 3: Many Encounters Will End In Disaster
A/N: This is the first revision-exclusive chapter!
"Sunset, I'm not sure if you should be usi-" began Flash.
"Oh, be quiet," Sunset interrupted. "I represent the Princesses for the Alicorn Festival's preparations. So what if a few strings need to be pulled?"
"But I'm not sure if-"
"How about we go see the music?" Sunset said, rolling her eyes.
"OK, Jitters, try and keep your chirping not too high," a yellow pegasus mare said to a chickadee. This was Fluttershy.
"Hello," said a voice behind her. Fluttershy made a small squeak as her birds flew away. The mare turned to see that it was Sunset Shimmer. "You're in charge of music for the Alicorn Festival, aren't you?" she asked.
"Um... yes," Fluttershy quietly replied.
"Good," Sunset said. "I want to keep this meeting short. You're doing good," she lied. "Keep up the good work." As the unicorn trotted off, followed by Flash, a light cobalt bluish gray
The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 2Chapter 2: Ponyville
A/N: This chapter has quite a few things changed.
"Well, we're here," Flash Sentry said as he and Sunset Shimmer departed the train. "Welcome to Ponyville." Sunset levitated her luggage over.
"Lieutenant Sentry, be a dear and carry my luggage?" she asked. "That way I can focus on the preparations for the Alicorn Festival." A scowl from Flash was all Sunset had to see.
"Hay no," he said angrily. "I'm here to keep you from doing something reckless, not to be your luggage carrier. So, get to it."
Sunset glared back at the guard. "Excuse me? I am Princess Celestia's prized pupil, thank you very much, and you should-"
"How about we start with seeing the mayor?" Flash interrupted, clearly trying to change the subject. "We should at least get to know the place a bit."
"Oh fine..." Sunset deadpanned, shuddering about the disaster that might follow.
For the center of Ponyville, the town square was surprisingly empty. There was a lar
The Freezing Night Revised Chapter 1Chapter 1: Sunrise, Sunset
A/N: Here's the first revised chapter, and boy, it's different than the original chapter 1!
Sunset Shimmer skimmed through books, looking for magic that would make her a princess. She eventually found a book that seemed interesting. "The Crystal Mirror... every thirty moons, a portal will open to... another world?" she read out of Canterlot Castle: A History.
"That's not really for you to know, is it?"
Sunset felt a chill down her spine. Slowly turning around, she saw... Princess Celestia. And she was mad.
"How dare you keep this kind of magic from me!" Sunset shouted, glaring at the Princess of the Sun. "You know that I'm ready for this, that I can be great!"
"You could be great," Celestia replied coldly. "I thought I saw compassion and sincerity in you, but it was nothing but ambition. You're being selfish, you need to step back and reflect..."
"I'm selfish?! That book right there says I could become a
The Freezing Night Revised: PrologueWelp, here we go. My third and final attempt at creating an AU. This'll be MASSIVELY different from my last one. Now revised so it makes more sense.
Once upon a time, in the magical land of Equestria, there lived two regal sisters and their niece who ruled together and created harmony for all the land. To do this, the elder sister used her unicorn powers to raise the sun at dawn. The younger brought out the moon to begin the night. The niece brought love to the land, showing compassion for all of Equestria. Thus, the two sisters and their niece maintained balance for their kingdom and all their subjects: all the different types of ponies.
But as time went on, the niece wanted attention. She was tired of being ignored, always in the shadow of the two sisters. One fateful day, she betrayed the elder sister by attacking her. The younger sister tried to reason with her while the elder recovered, but the bitterness in the young one's heart transformed her into a wicked mare of ice
And That's How Pinkie Pie Got Her Cutie Mark v2After watching Season 4, I thought I would revise my interpretation of the MLP creation myth.
In the beginning, before time itself, there was the Void. Eventually, the emptiness began to shift. And the Cosmic Scribe was born. The Scribe wrote down words into the void, and the Primordials came into being. Aether. Ananke. Chronos. Erebus. Eros. Gaia. Hemera. Hydros. The Nesoi. Nyx. The Ourea. Phanes. Phusis. Pontus. Thalassa. And Thesis. These were the 16 Primordials, who would write the laws of Creation. Gaia wrote down words, thus creating the planet. Hydros wrote water into the world. Aether wrote the atmosphere into existence, and Chronos wrote time. The Nesoi and Ourea created islands and mountains. But the most impressive was when Phusis and Thesis wrote life into the universe.
One race in particular fascinated the Primordials: Ponies. So the Primordials descended to the planet, taking the form of winged unicorns. They guided and taught the ponies different things about the
Pony POV Fan Song: Come little poniesPony POV Series
"Come Little Ponies"
Come little ponies
I'll take you away
Mama's warm embrace
Come little ponies
The time's come to play
Here in the
Follow sweet ponies
I'll show you the way
The fog will give you
What you want best
Weep not poor ponies
For life is this way
Mama will show you
Hush now dear ponies
It must be this way
I'll take you out of
Rest now my ponies
For soon we'll away
Into the fog
Your happy place
Come little ponies
I'll take you away
Into your Mama's
Come little ponies
The time's come to play
Here in the
Don't kill me for this (2)Chaptah 2
Takaya carryed da bag in2 hiz lare. He opend it and..... Lazuli fell owt!!1! "U will knot seel uweigh Nicks! Nsync shell awaykin and breed about da Fall!" Katara laffed statdistickully.
And den........ Mintao ran inn! "Takiuh, get ur hams of mi gurlfried" He simmoned Orfeus. Takiya summoked Hipnose, and releesed hiz pet lepurd!
Lizalfo summoned Satan, and he kooled da leotard wif Blakk Vypurr! Luzali den through Takata in2 a tiger pot!
Dey seduktively woked bak 2 Inuba, wear Lazili went into Joonez food cort. Da ownlee 1 dere wuz Ryoji Mochizuuki, who wuz sitting down board.
"Hai, Riojee-koon!" Lauli sed sexily. Ryiji rolled hiz eyes.
"Let me guess. You're here to try and seduce me, when everybody knows how you randomly kill people for no apparent reason, yet they still love you," said Ryoji.
Lazucki ignited dat cement. "Did u git mi tect massage?"
Ryoji sighed. "I deleted it as soon as I got it." Lauli wuz shacked wen she herd dat. "U dident!"
"I did," the boy replied
Parent AU: Actor!Levi x Singer!Reader II
"Papa, Papa look! Mama's on TV!"
Levi was currently coming from the kitchen when he over heard his son excitedly mention his mother on the large flat screen TV. He looked, noticing that you were presented on the TV show: Dancing with the Stars. Levi growled as you were dancing swing with the man who was presented as Reiner Braun who was famous for his appearances on dance movies and such. Levi continued to glare at the TV, watching as you had a smile on your face and Reiner was holding your body so freely. Eren looked away from the screen to look at his father, feeling the dark aura in the air.
"Horseface! Papa is getting angry again!"
"Young Master, I thought I told you to stop calling me that.."
"Hurry and get Papa some tea! I think he's going to blow!"
Jean sighed as scurried over to the kitchen, immediately making Levi's tea to help him calm down his nerves. Eren looked at the TV again, noticing that you and Reiner got a pretty high score for the dance per
Life's Joy- (Daddy!Levi x Mommy!Reader) 
“B-but daddy, p-please, we need you to protect u-us what if the t-t-titan c-c-comes and e-eats us?” Levi demounts his horse, ushering for his concerned counterparts to move on ahead. “Aunt Hanji” tries to send words of encouragement from afar, but Levi’s glare was enough to sew her lips shut. His eyes trail over to Isabel, thousands of curses aiming at the sky when he saw his daughter’s tear laden eyes.
He used not care so much until he had a little girl to take care of. One who’s eyes held the wonders of the world, one who’s heart was as innocent as the bud of a rose. He crouches in front of her trembling body, concentrating on the way she picked at her nails.
Just like her mother.
Speaking of that, you were a little ways behind the two, your arms folded. Actually you were still quite bitter about Levi getting Erwin to forbid you from the expedition, so you were even more so
2P!America x Child!Reader - Tic Ticci
"Al~! Can you take me outside for ice cream?" you asked.
"You already had your ice cream." Allen responded as he changes the t.v channel.
"Daddy said that I can get another one~!"
"You can say all the please cuz I ain't going out to get you ice cream."
"Fine!" you pouted.
"Good girl!" Allen smiled as he ruffled your hair.
It's only an hour after Allen told you that he can't bring you outside for ice cream but you didn't give up.
You stood behind the couch that Allen was sitting on. That's when you started annoying him.
"Tic... Tic... Tic...Tic... Ticci... Tic..." you said, smiling.
~~~Five minutes later~~~
"Tic... Tic... Tic...Tic... Ticci... Tic..."
"Ticci... Tic... Tic..." you raised your arms up, "TWITCH!"
"Fine! I'll bring you out to get ice cream!" Allen blurted.
"Just. Don't. Do. That. Ever. Again."
You happily nodded.
Savior- (Daddy!Levi x Mommy!Reader) 
* A/N: There is mild gore further down, the usual SNK gore. Just a small heads up. ^^
“Daddy, who was I named after?’
“Wait, daddy what about me?” Farlan pipes up, squeezing a stuffed teddy in his arms. Levi almost inwardly cringes thinking about the number of stuffed animals in the small area which they lived.
“But daddyyyy, you just said our names!”
Levi barely chuckles, tempted dearly to squeeze the puffed out of cheeks of his daughter, who over the years inherited Isa
2P!England x Child!Reader - Tell Me A Story 4
"Yes poppet?" Oliver smiled as he place the tray of cupcakes on the counter.
"Tell me a story."
"Sure thing poppet~! You can take a seat if you like."
"I'll just sit on the floor~" you sat down and looked up at your father, waiting for him to start.
"Once upon a time, there lived a five family rabbits. One rabbit is the father named OllieBunny, the uncle named FranBunny, the oldest son named MatBunny, the other son named AlBunny and the cute daughter named [Nickname]Bunny."
"Wait, why am I called AlBunny?" Allen asked, who was sitting beside you.
"Shut up, AlBunny!" Oliver smiled, "Now where was I? Oh! Right! One day, they went out to get carrots to eat but EvilBunny came and took all of the carrots. The family became sad because they're so hungry. Then the next day, they went to the EvilBunny's house and killed him so they can eat the carrots and live their lifes. The end!"
You, Allen and Matthieu clapped.
A Father's Blessing [Daddy!LevixMommy!Reader AU]
'She's coming back home!'
'I can't wait to see her!'
'I should make her favorite dessert'
The raven-haired man slipped between his children who were scrubbing away at the walls. Mikasa was coming home for summer vacation and of course, the house had to be perfect! Levi was ecstatic to hear that his precious baby girl was coming home, although he didn't show it. But you knew how frantic he was. He'd been piling on chores on your sets of twins since she called the week before she got out. It's been three years already and she was going to be a senior starting in August. The thought of your oldest baby finally leaving the nest bought tears of joy to your eyes and also the sudden realization that you and Levi were beginning to be 'well seasoned'. You were starting to get gray hairs and dying them was out of the question. But in order to keep your 'Awesome Mom' title ( which you received from your kids friends) you had to step it up. You we
2P!FACE x Child!Reader - Little Boat On The Sea
You were laughing hard when Allen and Matthieu came downstairs wearing sailor clothes. You hold your camera ready to video them.
The thing is that they're not drunk. They're only doing this because they lost your favourite doll and you couldn't stop crying.
"Are you going to record this?" Allen asked, feeling miserable.
"1, 2, 3, Go!"
"Now the people they were so bad
That the Lord made the rain come down
And he washed away the bad cities
And he washed away the bad towns
And all of the people drowned!" Allen sang, which mad you laugh quietly.
"With the animals it was different
Though some of them drowned, too
The others were just poor animals
And they didn't know what to do!
So..." Matthieu sang.
You hold a paper boat on the edge of the camera to make it look like it's there.
"We built a little boat
As cut as it could be
And we put all the animals two by two
In my little boat on the sea.
The moo-cows went..." The two sang.
"Moo! Moo!" Allen sang.
"The piggies went...
Project: FEM - She-Hulk (BrucexReader)Something is wrong….Why can’t I open my eyes?
“Doctor, she’s barely responsive!”
Who are they talking about…?
“She’s lost a lot of blood. Do we have anyone who is willing to perform a blood transfusion?”
Your eyelids felt heavy and you felt a piercing pain in your stomach. Your lips were dry and cracked, your throat was worse and your entire body felt like there was an immense weight on it. Just lifting up your fingers caused great pain. You searched throughout your memories to try and figure out what had happened. The harder you thought, the more your brain hurt. Not being able to open your eyes was starting to terrify you.
Your hearing wasn’t all too good but you heard a faint beeping noise with beeps that were becoming very frequent with each passing second.
“Wait!” you heard someone familiar yell. “(Name) and I have the same blood type! Let me do a blood transfusion.”
“Who are yo
2P!Canada x Child!Reader - Tell Me A Story 3
"Mattie! Tell me a story!" you jumped on his bed, making it harder for him to read.
Matthieu closed his book and removed his glasses, "What kind?"
"Short one! Suitable for kids!"
"Okay. Sit down."
You stopped jumping and sat beside him.
"Once upon a time, there was a boy. His name is Allen... The end."
"That's not a complete story!" you jumped on him and started pulling his hair.
"It's a complete story." Matthieu said, sounding like it didn't hurt at all.
"No, it's not!"
"If you don't stop, I'll tell a scary one."
"Then I'll hunt you forever!!"
Matthieu grabbed and drop you out of his room before locking his door.
"Jerk!" you yelled.
Mystery of Star Swirl (Chapter 1)Chapter 1: Dinky's Report
Ponyville Schoolhouse was abuzz with foals presenting their reports on famous ponies.
"Thank you for your report on Minty, Twist," said Cheerilee.
"You're welcome, Mith Cheerilee," replied Twist. She trotted back to her seat.
"Who wants to go next?" Cheerilee asked. She noticed Dinky Hooves raising her hoof. "Dinky, do you want to go?"
"Yes, ma'am!" Dinky exclaimed, trotted up to the front. "My report is about Star Swirl the Bearded."
"You can't do a report better than mine on my great-grandfather!" called Diamond Tiara. A "SHH!" from Silver Spoon kept her quiet.
"OK… Star Swirl the Bearded was the most important conjurer of the Pre-Classical Era. He founded Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns and created over 300 spells. But Star Swirl was best known for his travels around the world to learn about magic." She noticed her classmates, including Silver Spoon, looked extremely excited.
"From his travels," Dinky continued, "Star Swirl learned many
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