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The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 5Chapter 5: Darkness Falls
A/N: Alright! Back to the original chapters! So anyway, my main inspiration were the stories "Flipside" and "The Right Place At The Wrong Time".
Celestia and Luna just stood there as Freezing Hate paced around the stage. "Why are you not bowing, aunts? I am your queen," Freezing Hate said with evil glee.
"You are no queen," Luna said, "you are a tyrant. Your coup 1000 years ago almost-"
"It is my right to be queen," Freezing Hate interrupted. "I deserved it! It is only because I was always in your shadows that I never got to the throne!" She then said the same words she said 1000 years ago. "There shall only be one queen in Equestria! And that queen shall be ME!" she roared, hooves slamming down on the stage, destroying it. "THAT is why you must bow before your queen!"
"And if you do become a queen, you would only rule Equestria with an iron hoof," Celestia said in response to Freezing Hate's speech. "You stopped being
The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 4Chapter 4: The Alicorn Festival
The town hall was completely empty, and Sunset was both mad and nervous. She had been caught. "Princess, I can explain everythin-" she started. The sounds of Princess Luna's introduction were heard outside.
"Is it true that you've manipulated most of Ponyville, hurt many ponies' feelings, and might ruin the Alicorn Festival?" Celestia demanded, glaring at her. "Are you aware of the importance of the Alicorn Festival? That other ponies have feelings? And that it's not all about you?" she continued.
"I was trying to make you trust me again!" Sunset pleaded. But Celestia wasn't fazed.
"It pains me to say this, but... Sunset Shimmer, I am removing you from the position of my pupil," she declared. "If we cannot get past this, your studies end here. You are welcome to stay in Canterlot when the festival is over, but you are no longer welcome in the castle."
Sunset was livid now. Her studies, over! She'd never get to the crystal mirror. Never to b
The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 3Chapter 3: Many Encounters Will End In Disaster
A/N: This is the first revision-exclusive chapter!
"Sunset, I'm not sure if you should be usi-" began Flash.
"Oh, be quiet," Sunset interrupted. "I represent the Princesses for the Alicorn Festival's preparations. So what if a few strings need to be pulled?"
"But I'm not sure if-"
"How about we go see the music?" Sunset said, rolling her eyes.
"OK, Jitters, try and keep your chirping not too high," a yellow pegasus mare said to a chickadee. This was Fluttershy.
"Hello," said a voice behind her. Fluttershy made a small squeak as her birds flew away. The mare turned to see that it was Sunset Shimmer. "You're in charge of music for the Alicorn Festival, aren't you?" she asked.
"Um... yes," Fluttershy quietly replied.
"Good," Sunset said. "I want to keep this meeting short. You're doing good," she lied. "Keep up the good work." As the unicorn trotted off, followed by Flash, a light cobalt bluish gray
The Freezing Night Revised: Chapter 2Chapter 2: Ponyville
A/N: This chapter has quite a few things changed.
"Well, we're here," Flash Sentry said as he and Sunset Shimmer departed the train. "Welcome to Ponyville." Sunset levitated her luggage over.
"Lieutenant Sentry, be a dear and carry my luggage?" she asked. "That way I can focus on the preparations for the Alicorn Festival." A scowl from Flash was all Sunset had to see.
"Hay no," he said angrily. "I'm here to keep you from doing something reckless, not to be your luggage carrier. So, get to it."
Sunset glared back at the guard. "Excuse me? I am Princess Celestia's prized pupil, thank you very much, and you should-"
"How about we start with seeing the mayor?" Flash interrupted, clearly trying to change the subject. "We should at least get to know the place a bit."
"Oh fine..." Sunset deadpanned, shuddering about the disaster that might follow.
For the center of Ponyville, the town square was surprisingly empty. There was a lar
The Freezing Night Revised Chapter 1Chapter 1: Sunrise, Sunset
A/N: Here's the first revised chapter, and boy, it's different than the original chapter 1!
Sunset Shimmer skimmed through books, looking for magic that would make her a princess. She eventually found a book that seemed interesting. "The Crystal Mirror... every thirty moons, a portal will open to... another world?" she read out of Canterlot Castle: A History.
"That's not really for you to know, is it?"
Sunset felt a chill down her spine. Slowly turning around, she saw... Princess Celestia. And she was mad.
"How dare you keep this kind of magic from me!" Sunset shouted, glaring at the Princess of the Sun. "You know that I'm ready for this, that I can be great!"
"You could be great," Celestia replied coldly. "I thought I saw compassion and sincerity in you, but it was nothing but ambition. You're being selfish, you need to step back and reflect..."
"I'm selfish?! That book right there says I could become a
The Freezing Night Revised: PrologueWelp, here we go. My third and final attempt at creating an AU. This'll be MASSIVELY different from my last one. Now revised so it makes more sense.
Once upon a time, in the magical land of Equestria, there lived two regal sisters and their niece who ruled together and created harmony for all the land. To do this, the elder sister used her unicorn powers to raise the sun at dawn. The younger brought out the moon to begin the night. The niece brought love to the land, showing compassion for all of Equestria. Thus, the two sisters and their niece maintained balance for their kingdom and all their subjects: all the different types of ponies.
But as time went on, the niece wanted attention. She was tired of being ignored, always in the shadow of the two sisters. One fateful day, she betrayed the elder sister by attacking her. The younger sister tried to reason with her while the elder recovered, but the bitterness in the young one's heart transformed her into a wicked mare of ice
And That's How Pinkie Pie Got Her Cutie Mark v2After watching Season 4, I thought I would revise my interpretation of the MLP creation myth.
In the beginning, before time itself, there was the Void. Eventually, the emptiness began to shift. And the Cosmic Scribe was born. The Scribe wrote down words into the void, and the Primordials came into being. Aether. Ananke. Chronos. Erebus. Eros. Gaia. Hemera. Hydros. The Nesoi. Nyx. The Ourea. Phanes. Phusis. Pontus. Thalassa. And Thesis. These were the 16 Primordials, who would write the laws of Creation. Gaia wrote down words, thus creating the planet. Hydros wrote water into the world. Aether wrote the atmosphere into existence, and Chronos wrote time. The Nesoi and Ourea created islands and mountains. But the most impressive was when Phusis and Thesis wrote life into the universe.
One race in particular fascinated the Primordials: Ponies. So the Primordials descended to the planet, taking the form of winged unicorns. They guided and taught the ponies different things about the
Pony POV Fan Song: Come little poniesPony POV Series
"Come Little Ponies"
Come little ponies
I'll take you away
Mama's warm embrace
Come little ponies
The time's come to play
Here in the
Follow sweet ponies
I'll show you the way
The fog will give you
What you want best
Weep not poor ponies
For life is this way
Mama will show you
Hush now dear ponies
It must be this way
I'll take you out of
Rest now my ponies
For soon we'll away
Into the fog
Your happy place
Come little ponies
I'll take you away
Into your Mama's
Come little ponies
The time's come to play
Here in the
Don't kill me for this (2)Chaptah 2
Takaya carryed da bag in2 hiz lare. He opend it and..... Lazuli fell owt!!1! "U will knot seel uweigh Nicks! Nsync shell awaykin and breed about da Fall!" Katara laffed statdistickully.
And den........ Mintao ran inn! "Takiuh, get ur hams of mi gurlfried" He simmoned Orfeus. Takiya summoked Hipnose, and releesed hiz pet lepurd!
Lizalfo summoned Satan, and he kooled da leotard wif Blakk Vypurr! Luzali den through Takata in2 a tiger pot!
Dey seduktively woked bak 2 Inuba, wear Lazili went into Joonez food cort. Da ownlee 1 dere wuz Ryoji Mochizuuki, who wuz sitting down board.
"Hai, Riojee-koon!" Lauli sed sexily. Ryiji rolled hiz eyes.
"Let me guess. You're here to try and seduce me, when everybody knows how you randomly kill people for no apparent reason, yet they still love you," said Ryoji.
Lazucki ignited dat cement. "Did u git mi tect massage?"
Ryoji sighed. "I deleted it as soon as I got it." Lauli wuz shacked wen she herd dat. "U dident!"
"I did," the boy replied
Hugs - Levi x Tall!Reader [Drabble]
Levi loved hugs.
You wouldn’t be able to tell that just by looking at him, or talking to him, or even knowing him. He’s very isolated. But it’s true, he loved hugs. He’s a hugger.
He especially loved hugging you.
You were far taller than he was, around four or five inches taller, you weren’t entirely sure, but you’d been dating a long while. People would always stare at the two of you as if you were some kind of freak pairing, and you’d think that you were. Being the taller person in the relationship you had made you feel awkward, especially considering he was a lot stronger than you.
One time you injured your leg and he had to pick you up bridal style to escort you to safety. It looked weird, to say in the least. You huddled yourself in as much as you could to make it look less like Levi was lugging around a Titan – albeit an attractive one – but a Titan nonetheless.
You’d hear people laughing at the two of you, making fun of
Bucky x Blind! Reader Lingering
The weather was gray and oppressive that morning, not to mention extremely chilly. And the best part; it wasn’t even autumn yet. They were barely two weeks into September and (Name) was already done with the fall. She groaned when she awoke to the sound of the alarm clock blaring noisily and incredibly gratingly on the other side of the bed.
“...Mngh...Bucky...turnitoff…” She mumbled annoyedly, reaching over to said man who was sleeping next to her. He grunted, still half asleep, but shifted and hit the clock to turn it off.
“...You broke another alarm clock, didn’t you?” She guessed tiredly, met with a now annoyed grunt from Bucky. He shifted again, and she heard him move closer to her. Then a strong, warm arm wrapped around her and the messy hair of her lovely man tickled her face as he grumbled, already grumpy.
"Aww, poor baby. ...You do know you have to get up now though, right?” She added, earning a third grunt from Bu
My Only Love ( Levi x Reader x Cleaning Supplies )
(A/N: There are suggestive themes in here as you have guessed by the title xD This is a special birthday gift to :Iconattackontitaneren123:! Happy birthday, Honeybun! <3 )
"HANJI WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU PUT IN LEVI'S TEA?!" You shouted when Levi told you he felt a strange taste in the brown liquid
"It's just my new experiment!" Hanji laughed awkwardly
"Wha- HANJI! Why the fuck would you do that when he asked ME to bring him tea?! Why me?!" You were panicking and walking around in the kitchen
"Oh, don't worry! I just thought you would be nice, because Levi won't get angry if it's YOU, who brought him the tea" Hanji wiggled her eyebrows and you blushed
"Zoe, I have told you that, the sex we had was when we were both drunk. Nothing more, nothing less" You puffed your red cheeks out
"Don't deny it, (Y/n)! I can tell by the moans from Levi's room that you guys are having sex every night" The brunette laughed
"We what?! Hanji, I had sex with him only once, I swear!" You said and the scienti
2P!FACE x Child!Reader x FACE - Confusion [CH 3]
"Yeah, Old man," [2P/N] spoke," When are we going out? I wanna see my father."
"My name is Oliver! And we'll go when Allie and Francy wakes up."
"I'll wake them up~!' [2P/N] siled as she stood up from the couch and skipped upstairs to the bathroom.
There, she grabbed a bucket of cold water and carried it to Allen's room then drop it on his face.
"Mr.Arthur? When are we going?" you asked.
"Right father Alfred wakes up, love." Arthur replied as he pours coffee in his cup.
"Say, do you have a big knife here?"
You smiled, "Can I use it for a while?"
"Sure but be careful."
You nodded and went to get the big knife then walked over to Alfred's room. You stood beside his bed then smiled creepily while a dark aura surrounds you, "Porkchop~ Wake up~"
"If you don't, then I'll happily cut of your head~"
Alfred immediately got off of his bed, "NOOOOOOO!!!"
Lego Invasion (Denmark x Reader)
Lego Invasion (Denmark x Reader)
“Yes min droning?” (Yes my queen)
“You have a serious problem” you deadpanned
“I have no idea what you’re talking about” he replied in an innocent voice with his usual goofy smile plastered on his face, however you could see through that smile of his and you could tell he was nervous.
You had been told that he was quiet the errrm how do I put this, quite the serious collector but nothing could of prepared you for this!
It was everywhere, Lego was EVERYWHERE!
Lego wallpaper, Lego printed carpet, Lego bedding, Lego coffee table even Lego themed soap! Not to mention the giant frigging Lego block in the corner of the room. You turned to look at your boyfriend of a year and a half with a serious expression as he just smiled back acting like he didn't know what you were on about.
Sherlock x Reader Then
"It's turning out to be one of those days again." (Name) murmured as she stared out the apartment window. She sighed, lonely, looking up at the ominous gray clouds in distaste. Sherlock didn't respond from his place in the kitchen, merely continued staring into the microscope as if nothing had been said at all. (Name) cast a glance over at him and huffed, getting the feeling that he wasn't about to acknowledge her presence anytime soon. At least, not on his own.
"Did you hear me, Sherlock?" She asked him from her seat, making the consulting detective hum as a sort of response. An unamused frown appeared on her face from his lack of desire to respond.
"...What was that, (Name)?" He questioned absentmindedly, breaking away from the instrument to swap out one of the bacteria samples with another. Her mouth twitched slightly, knowing that he was getting absorbed into yet another mysterious case. He was always doing this sort of thing, unfortunately. Granted this case was more inte
Notorious (Eren x Reader) [Serial Killers!AU]
The rain falls down in rivulets, heavy and cold; it washes away the crimson that seeps onto the street, that mingles with the freezing water, leaving no trace of the nauseating scent of blood. The barest hint of a smile played on your lips as you stared down at the corpse, its pupils blown wide, mouth hanging open in a silent scream. Multiple stab marks are littered on the body, a long vertical cut down its torso, still oozing fresh red. Twirling the knife around your gloved fingers, your gaze hardened, mouth twisting into a snarl.
Filthy. Yet another person who had slipped through justice's fingers. A man acquitted on the death of his wife; no one had noticed the bruises marking her arms and the back of her neck.
Ice cold droplets kiss your skin, sliding down the side of your face. You turn your head up towards the sky. It's cloudless, the moon casting its ominous glow through the dark clouds. You looked down at th
I Can't Stop - Sebastian x Stalker! Reader
You are a creeper.
Don’t deny it. Wait scratch that.
You are much worse than that; you are a stalker.
“I don’t mean to be” you would say to yourself every time you went to sleep.
But you just couldn’t help it. It was great watching him.
The way his hands skimmed the surface of the dishes with grace. Or how his jet black hair was perfectly flippant. And oh oh! Don’t forget how his red eyes would flicker pink when he heard something especially enticing.
You blushed and held your cheeks.
Mey-rin, who was currently trying to dust the wardrobe but unfortunately broke a vase in the process, saw you grow red. “_____ are you alright?”
Caught you were blushing this way was unprofessional for a maid like you. Clearing your throat, you straightened your apron with your hands. “No I was just feeling my temperature”
She rose a brow, “That is a very strange ______-chan” She neared you inspecting you, “
Commission: Mulan's Marriage (WG)The match-maker had been doing her job for a very long time, longer than anyone probably knew. She had met dozens of hundreds of would-be brides in her line of work, some far worse than others and some less capable, even a few who turned out to less interest in marrying men than they did with washing their faces. Yet, never before had she met one young woman who, in spite of her pretty face, was so rude, so obnoxious, so incompetent in behaving like a proper lady that she would actually make the match-maker reconsider her entire course of life.
Fa Mulan. That brat had humiliated her, not only personally, but publicly in front of an entire crowd of potential customers and future brides. The match-maker winced as she shifted her backside in her seat; she had been left with minor wounds after sitting on hot coals, but they were still aching, the skin left feeling tender to the touch. She'd gotten ink all over her face, tea splashed all over her, and even a nasty little cricket had jumped
Mystery of Star Swirl (Chapter 1)Chapter 1: Dinky's Report
Ponyville Schoolhouse was abuzz with foals presenting their reports on famous ponies.
"Thank you for your report on Minty, Twist," said Cheerilee.
"You're welcome, Mith Cheerilee," replied Twist. She trotted back to her seat.
"Who wants to go next?" Cheerilee asked. She noticed Dinky Hooves raising her hoof. "Dinky, do you want to go?"
"Yes, ma'am!" Dinky exclaimed, trotted up to the front. "My report is about Star Swirl the Bearded."
"You can't do a report better than mine on my great-grandfather!" called Diamond Tiara. A "SHH!" from Silver Spoon kept her quiet.
"OK… Star Swirl the Bearded was the most important conjurer of the Pre-Classical Era. He founded Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns and created over 300 spells. But Star Swirl was best known for his travels around the world to learn about magic." She noticed her classmates, including Silver Spoon, looked extremely excited.
"From his travels," Dinky continued, "Star Swirl learned many
Inspector Wolf The old lady was dead. I could smell it before I even got into the house. The whole place reeked of adrenaline, sweat, fear, copper and steel. He’d dropped her right in her living room. Chopped and chopped until she stopped moving. But I could tell I was getting close. This had been done in a hurry, and the killer didn’t have the time to clean up after himself like he usually did.
Across the room, the phone rang. The shrill sound set my teeth to grinding, but I ignored it. Instead I followed the killer’s bloody footprints into the back bedroom. He’d climbed out the window. If I hurried, I could catch up to him and end this disgusting spree he was on.
Then the answering machine kicked in. “Hi, Gramma! It’s Red. Sorry I’m running late. I kind of lost track of time. But don’t worry. I packed the picnic and I’m heading out the door right now. Love you.”
She’d been expec
The TrundlerThe waste land behind the fire station is always silent. No birds sing there, and even the wild rabbits and feral cats avoid it. Weedy wildflowers nod their seasonal heads in the breeze. Lying fallow in the midst of housing developments, shopping malls, the new movie theater — the vacant lot stands out like a knife wound on a woman’s placid face, shocking, brazen, ugly.
It is always empty. Except for one thing: a ragged heap of old trash, all nasty black tar paper and vicious snarls of rusted wire, car parts and broken glass and other junkyard jetsam. The embodiment of injury waiting to happen, an invitation to a tetanus shot... the city never hauled it away. No one ever wants anywhere near it; it radiates an eerie sense of calculating watchfulness.
And at night, it wanders.
When darkness falls, and the last cars heading into the hives of tract housing stop illuminating the asphalt with moving-picture shadows, it… unfolds. Bitter, broken tangles, grotesquely mov
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